tsumamix1,
There is a useful concept, applicable to writing, called the paragraph. It is comprised of two or more sentences, the first of which may contain general statements; while the next and any following, support the generality with facts.
A series of paragraphs, thus constucted, are the method of writing implemented to inform others that which you would like them to understand.
Could you please, in the future, attempt to use this system. Thankyou.
Joseph Sugarman,
design@dream-home.com