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Originally Posted by Bulletproof Monk
As I have the consent of my wife, and we have mutually agreed, and being responsible for our own actions, she and our infant son, who is in our care may from time to time journey with me, also enjoying their god given rights, waiving none ever.
We shall indeed enjoy many safe journeys on the land mass known as.............and hope that you may too.
Thankyou once again for your time.
Bulletproof
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As I'm trying really hard to learn here, that word MAY just doesn't sit right, it's almost presumptive of permissiveness. Wouldn't a statement such as WILL be better. As in, they WILL be...? Just wondering.
Also, why did you add "who is in our care?". You've aleady established he is YOUR son.
These word games seem dangerous to me. The less of them you use, the better off you are...IMHO as a newbie!
